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her heart broke, today,
as tears flood her meaning, fore,
his heart beats no more...

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The following comments are for "Don't Go..."
by Robinbird

Don't Go
Sadness of the moment well depicted. --R.K.

( Posted by: R.K.Singh [Member] On: March 7, 2005 )

R.K...don't go...
Interesting, I've been studying your work, recently. I'm quit pleased, that your liked...
You have some beautiful reads...Robin

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: March 7, 2005 )

Chick can spell, just can't type...I'm pleased that YOU liked...Robin

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: March 7, 2005 )

This poem reminds me of the passing of my father...I will miss him but try to remember only the good....Good job...Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: March 8, 2005 )

Don't Go!
This Haiku is BOMBAY! I love it. Thanks for the read.


( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: March 8, 2005 )

Kacee, thanks again...
thanks, Kacee...this is sad, but, death is a part of life...I wasn't sure how this would go over, I guess this is Myku, thanks to you.

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: March 8, 2005 )

Jeannie, thanks too...
appeciate much, your appreciation...I'm trying,
sometimes it works, sometimes, well, it don't...

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: March 8, 2005 )

Don't Go
A beautiful sentiment and so appropriate for me to thank you for your heartfelt comments about Terri Schiavo.

the other robinrenee

( Posted by: robinrenee [Member] On: March 25, 2005 )

word play, check mate...SAME ON YOU!

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: April 27, 2006 )

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