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You say you’re better than me
And I laugh at the thought

You say you can take anything -
Any thing you want

I try to tell you how wrong you are until I see the sight
The site of the girls I like

Turning their backs and I say it’s ok - its just one, then one by one they walk away
As a smile grows on his face

I never thought he was right, but I am in shock to this day
They say its ok you’re my friend and he can’t take that away

Then after awhile all I see is friends, and as I look at him
He just widens his grin; he goes through them day by day

After some time he starts to look around and he no longer seas girls;
He sees angry women with broken hearts

Then as they fade away
The realizes he is alone… alone in the dark… in the dark



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The following comments are for "Mr. Smooth"
by poetfreak

Mr. Smooth
poetfreak,

you might want to reread this carefully and make sure each word is typed exactly as you want it to be.

Keep writing!

( Posted by: KateLouise [Member] On: March 18, 2005 )

?
What do you mean; there are some word I used for a play on words. Such as 'After some time he starts to look around and he no longer seas girls;
' it is meant to be a way to measure the ammot of girls. Please do not be shy about pointing these things out.

( Posted by: poetfreak [Member] On: March 18, 2005 )





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