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my life is like a carousel
spining round and round
but every time i try to get up
i fall on to the ground
there is no way for me
to ever leave this place
even though there is a look
of horror on my face
i need a little guidance
but that is no where near
because the only one who would help
doesnt really care...

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~trish~

dearest lord...thank you for my friends who care, the ones who help me when i have the smallest look of sorrow on my face. <3.


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by how do i live with this shame





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