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if you love me
you'll kill me
if you hate me
you'll let me live
if you love me
you'll let me go
if you hate me
you will hold onto me
if you love me
you'll forget me
if you hate me
you'll keep comeing back
pick please...
so i can live

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~trish~

dearest lord...thank you for my friends who care, the ones who help me when i have the smallest look of sorrow on my face. <3.


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by how do i live with this shame

????????
i like ur poem its awesome

( Posted by: pinup [Member] On: March 9, 2005 )





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