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Come, know me.

I am the cognoscente of the carnal.


The intrepid explorer of your downy depths

and cavernous openings.

I could be more than a passing glance,a

whispered suggestion.

My fevered head rests against the cold

windowpane of your chest;

Open, imbibe, devour my flesh.

I am transfixed.

I will nestle in the roots of your desire

and blossom in the canopy of your satiation.

I'll offer you exotic pleasures like

Sweetmeats at a banquet;

You'll suckle at the breasts of my audacity.

Come live with me and be my love some poet

said;Come lie with me and be my lover.



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Yania Padilla


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