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What is justly deserved

You will receive

In this life or the next

Retribution will he sought

Rise up to the next

A monster you fear

You do not know what form it takes

Unable to see it, as it lies in shadows

You strain your neck, as terrified as you are

To satisfy your need to catch a glimpse

But your mindedness blinds you from what this power is

As you dangle Pandoraís open lock,

Youíve only angered the monster

Not befriended him

Your somas are one now,

The monsterís and yours

But your fatuous remarks separate you

As you were before

Only now you know the monster will harm you

For the hurt youíve caused

You deserve the pain you will receive

"Soul of my soul of the soul of a hundred universes,
be water in this now-river, so jasmine flowers
will lift on the brim, and someone far off
can notice the flower-colors and know
there's water here."

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The following comments are for "He Favors himself over all man kind"
by icicleicicle

What a wonderful way to express "do unto others" or "what goes around comes around" I very much enjoyed your poetry.

( Posted by: LadyKimberly [Member] On: March 6, 2005 )

it is actually from the gospel of mary magdalen

"The first form is darkness, the second desire, the third ignorance, the fourth is the excitement of death, the fifth is the kingdom of the flesh, the sixth is the foolish wisdom of flesh, the seventh is the wrathful wisdom. These are the seven powers of wrath." 8:19

i thought it would be interesting to render it in my own words...and thats whay i got:)

thanxx again

( Posted by: icicleicicle [Member] On: March 7, 2005 )

what book in the bible?
Which book in the bible did this come from? If you would like to e-mail me here is my e-mail address I would like to read it! Thanks

( Posted by: LadyKimberly [Member] On: March 8, 2005 )

It is

( Posted by: LadyKimberly [Member] On: March 8, 2005 )

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