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Bright fall leaves swirl around my head
Yet i feel full of gloom
I wait for each day to end
Not knowing what i'm waiting for

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The following comments are for "Expectation"
by Persephone

Loved it
Your poem brought me back to a time in my life,I enjoyed your poem. Simple though it says so much.

( Posted by: LadyKimberly [Member] On: March 6, 2005 )

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