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go ahead and walk away
pretend like i don't exist
and to you i won't again
i am nothing, i am dead
the ash of a memory
the shadow under your feet
trample me as you walk on
my soul is gone, is nothing
a mute whisper of the wind
a flittering listlessness
a nothing you can't explain

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