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Cum, or menstruate, on canvas,
Kill your TV,
Use your globe for target practice,
Get away with an imperfect crime,
Vomit up all your Gods,
Burn "The Complete Works of Shakespeare,"
Have sex on the flag,
Contemptously defecate in a court of law,
Withdraw $10,000 dollars in twenties, stamp a hammer and sickle on each dashing Andy and spread it around "The Mall of America,"
Black out "science" in your library's dictionary,
Send in a ballot without seeing who you voted for...
and walk on two legs again.


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The following comments are for "I'm Not Okay and You're Not Okay"
by seanspacey

You had me at "Cum."
I laughed, but I suppose a more appropriate response may have been to cry. Well said.

( Posted by: Spider [Member] On: March 7, 2005 )

I'm Not Okay and You're Not Okay
"Do what thou will shall be the whole of the Law, love is the Law, love under will." -Aleister Crowley

It's good to see you again.

( Posted by: PAIxMEI [Member] On: March 8, 2005 )

I'm Not Okay and You're Not Okay
Thanks Spider and it's good to see you, too, PAIx. I'm not so sure about this piece; I was pretty drunk when I wrote it. I only left it published because of the equal opportunity art project.

( Posted by: seanspacey [Member] On: March 8, 2005 )

thoughts
yah man this was a lil confussing 4 me althought i see ur point but i also laffed at it a lil lol wel thats all she wrote

( Posted by: tinibaby69 [Member] On: March 9, 2005 )

Rant/Poem
Outstanding poem with lots of good advice. Doesn't sound drunken at all. My only problem - I don't have 10 grand. I also don't own a weapon to use on my globe. May I use a sledge hammer?
Or maybe I can throw cans of Blatz at it.

Seriously, this is some fine stuff. It has fire, anger and passion.

( Posted by: gomarsoap [Member] On: March 9, 2005 )

Drunken rant.. poetry.. same difference =p
I'm jus messing.. I'm with gomarsoap on this one.. it doesn't sound like some drunken rant at all. There's charge to it.. what sealed it for me was the ending sentence. To do all that stuff ya said and then "walk on two legs again".. almost like an I-dare-you kinda thing and walk proudly.

( Posted by: FurryNippleRing [Member] On: March 15, 2005 )

heh
MIndFcuk. i get it though.

( Posted by: fcukedupboi [Member] On: November 6, 2006 )





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