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As every night and day
I feel a great presence
surrounding me, a
strange omnipresence
of an odd spirit who
appears to come
closer to me.
Feeling so numb
and very unsure if
I should fear what is
most likely a spirit,
flowing like a mist
forming innocent
whispers through night.
Feeling astonished
and full of fright.
This mysterious spirit
always comes and goes,
unaware if this ghost
is a friend or a foe.
Uncertain of what is
said within his voice.
It cannot be ignored
And now I have no choice.
The only alternative which
remains within me
is to live with a spirit
that will never let me be.


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The following comments are for "Spirit"
by SiCk_LeBy

I enjoyed this read...I want to share something with you; Now, the spirit that overwhelms me, is the Spirit of the Lord...There are so many different types of spirits out there...But, in your own way, you will know the difference.

Nice write...


( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: March 1, 2005 )

Lebys' spirit
I very much enjoyed this poem. I am very unsure as to what spirit you are living with, perhaps it is only your shadow, im not sure. While reading that poem I had that very familiar feeling of someone standing behind me...turning around I find there is noone there. A spirit I too have to live with..

Thanks so much for the write,


( Posted by: TheFerryman [Member] On: March 2, 2005 )

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