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When the time comes for me leave this world
To be put under the Earth, six feet deep,
Donít shed your tears for me
For my heart and soul will be at peace.
To live the life that I had lived
To conquer the things that Iíd been through
Was far more greater than the oceans blue.
To have the love that I once had,
And to have the love that once had me,
Was far more deeper than the deepest sea.
To touch the lives that I had touched,
And to be touched by those around
Cannot be expressed even by the greatest sound.
So, donít shed your tears for me
When the time comes for me to leave.
Instead just smile and know you still have GOD's love
And soon our souls will be joined with the Kingdom above

you must first learn to see the truth within yourself before you can see the truth within the world around you


The following comments are for "When The Time Comes"
by chicabear

When The Time Comes
Just a note to say I appreciated your work. Death is a very personal thing and you seem to be on the right track.

( Posted by: Sheena [Member] On: February 28, 2005 )

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