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It happened that every wish might not come true
As waves and winds play with them
And make every pinky dream turn to a real but blue
You donít take for granted to live in peace in this space
As any unexpected circumstances might pop up and take place

The sweet is never as sweet without the sour, and I know the sour which allows me to appreciate the sweet.

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The following comments are for "In this world"
by fairgrace

"As waves and winds play with them"

I like the way you used this to show seen and unseen circumstances.



( Posted by: feliciastone [Member] On: February 24, 2005 )

like feliciastone i also liked that line very much so

( Posted by: FangChen [Member] On: July 27, 2005 )

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