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Because of you I donít believe.
Our finest moments,
littering my mind.

This suffering fairy tale
lost a thousand words each day.
Our final hour was a lie.

This audible denial
is confusing.
This horrible sense of reality is destructive.

Take away the sun.
replace the moon.
Tear down the stars.

Create the past.
Build new realities
pollute the mind.


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The following comments are for "litter the sky"
by DEMONeyesBLUE

Tom
Tom when I read ur bio..I was sort of not beliveing u r only 16...this piece is very well written especially this part
Take away the sun.
replace the moon.
Tear down the stars.

Create the past.
Build new realities
pollute the mind.

this is the first time I read for you and I will try to read more of ur works

fairgrace

( Posted by: fairgrace [Member] On: February 23, 2005 )





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