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Raging hardhearted frozen difficulties,
Highs and lows, manic sensibilities.
Lashing out without rhyme or reason,
Miserable pain no matter what season.

Taking a beating without just cause,
Confusing my mind, causing a pause.
What changed you to such pure hate?
Search for a charm to grant you abate.

Why make things what they are not?
Stop marching like a juggernaut.
Forget your overworked vanity,
To maintain a fragile sanity.

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The following comments are for "She Changed"
by nelson

Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my work. I am glad you liked it. It was the fruit of a very difficult, unusual divorce. Again poetry became my therapy.

( Posted by: nelson [Member] On: February 25, 2005 )

you know
You know I think your work is remarkable. It has passion and feelings that create a vivid picture in my mind. I am sorry for your pain. Keep me in your thoughts.
-Your #1 fan

( Posted by: shadjackie [Member] On: March 1, 2005 )

YOU changed
I can see this is differnt from ur typical style of natural elemnts and describtion..
I felt I was in a rush while I read it...
something new and different

good job


( Posted by: fairgrace [Member] On: March 2, 2005 )

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