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Cross the oceans and all time,
To finally bathe in the sublime.
Tearing eyes filled with delight.
Passion, passion, passion in sight!

Age searching through the plains,
Knowing the joy unity contains.
Ancient souls formed of light.
Passion, passion, passion in sight!

Sharing too much not to fear,
Careful to guard my tear.
Rejection the seed of fright.
Passion, passion, passion in sight!

Trembling caused by her magic hand,
Honored to obey any command.
Consumed by the fire painfully bright.
Passion, passion, passion tonight?


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