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waited a lifetime
a touch past a special friend
could I still be dream...
~Robinbird~


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The following comments are for "I waited..."
by Robinbird

Robin "waited"
Robin, I really enjoyed this piece. Quite nice...


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( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: February 20, 2005 )

B7L...
Thank you much, and you know how I feel about that...~Robin~

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: February 20, 2005 )

lifetime
Robinbird...
your playing of words and what comes out of that is always amazing..I wish I could be able to write such haikus..
truly...your haikus amd also Bobby's are the best of this site

all the best
fairgrace

( Posted by: fairgrace [Member] On: February 20, 2005 )

oops! Difference of opinion
Sorry, Robin, but I am not as positive about this one as they are. I think you've probably chosen a very personal event to write about this time, and it's muddied your usual ease with words. The images are too vague; not concrete enough for the form.

Sorry, but it isn't up to your usual standard, IMHO

( Posted by: commercialends [Member] On: February 20, 2005 )

Commercialands...
Hey, youre welcome to comment, and your opinions
a respectfully accepted. Also, I like the idea of rating, I'm going to try to do that as well.
I have no problem with you caring not for this as
well as you have others. back to haiku, have you ever just been "the best friend I got", and of
all things you would like to be more, but, dare not ruin a good fiendship, that was where I was going...Always welcome Joshua...~Robinbird~

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: February 20, 2005 )

I wiated..
It's love in action, like whispering of a cool, morning breeze.You felt it well.-R.K.

( Posted by: R.K.Singh [Member] On: March 6, 2005 )





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