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That incessant ringing
intrusive, repetetive sound
Who calls here?
Again and again and again
Holding still
No movements
I do not wish to be found
More ringing
Peeking in through fiber optics, through bells
GO AWAY
Cease calling
Leave me be
How I curse your inventor
Damn Alexander Graham Bell
Silence, ah the silence !
Delicious solace
So brief
IT RINGS AGAIN!
It's ringing now, ringing
virtual knocking
Pause, breathing pauses
All movements still, lest I be detected
Hiding here within.


Author's Note:
Semi inspired by "The Bells" and real life.



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All that we see or seem, is but a dream within a dream....
Edgar Allen Poe


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The following comments are for "Hiding Here Within"
by poesandpoetry

stop the insanity
I can only imagine what this is about. Hate to say I told you so! Love ya!

( Posted by: johnb79 [Member] On: October 10, 2005 )





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