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You may have heard the wind moan.
But where does the sound really come from?
Only I know.
It comes from the wretched souls of the dead who rise into the sky every night.
They moan in pain as they watch their living loved ones cry over their dead body.
They know that they will never see them again, only that they will be trapped in hell tortured for eternity.
But how do I know?
I am one of them.

~ Blind courage is another way to say stupidity.

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The following comments are for "The Wind's Moan"
by 00Greenleaf00

one of them
My God this would be so horrible if it ever were truely experienced...!!!
My hat is always off to those writers who can take position of deads and imagine themselves to be one of them..I have a friend who imagined herself lying in her are so brave to take such imagination and put it down in a well done and short written expressions

all the best and hope to read more of you

( Posted by: fairgrace [Member] On: February 21, 2005 )

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