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Pieces of me left behind,
Like diamonds shedding
From Angel’s wings.

Specks of thoughts,
Fluttering pearls,
all of me.

I smile with pleasure,
As pieces of me
Fall onto places I have been.

To find my stillness
Just follow the
glittering pearls…

…that follow me.

Soukieh
2-14-2005


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"Your pain is the breaking of the shell that encloses your understanding" Khalil Gibran, The Prophet




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The following comments are for "Of Me"
by Serendipity

"Of Me"...
Miss Serendipity, beautiful little write, I
see many more beautiful writes, I like this
style, for whatever reason, this is "good",
in to your life I shall dive, Miss Serendipity...
~Robin~
p.s. Lovely avater...

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: February 19, 2005 )

Sweet
Thank you for your sweet words! It is great to get comments from people I don't know..it got me reading some of your poetry....I promise comments will come soon.
Mona

( Posted by: Serendipity [Member] On: February 19, 2005 )

of me
Mona..
I read about you and I felt excited when I knew you lived a while in Egypt..for I am originally Egyptian but didnt live there ..just on vacations...
I read one of your works long ago and remebered you now when I read your name..
I alos read your [reflecting] becaus ethe topic grapped me as I have one titled [reflection]..
As for this piece..I like such lind of poems In which I feel the sentiment scent

all the best
Fairgrace

( Posted by: fairgrace [Member] On: February 19, 2005 )

of me
it is lovely, i read it about 5 times. it's very simple, and gets to you easily. although it contradicts the mood of most of your other poetry it's good to see you "smiling with pleasure"

( Posted by: seniorme [Member] On: February 20, 2005 )





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