Inseparable Lovers
by nae411 (Moderator) - published: February 16, 2005
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Category - Poetry
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Blindfolded,
hands bound,
I led you
into my mind and
surrendered my thoughts to you.

Fragments of who
I have become
are unrecognizable to most
but not to you,
I can’t fool you
don’t want to.
You know the real me.

You laughed with me and
we became children.
We cried and became
inseparable lovers.
Without sight,
without fear,
I led you into my mind and
you led me into a world unknown to most…

One that is solely ours,
And if I forget to say this later,
Thank you.

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I am on a journey. Looking for Me. Everyday I get a little closer. The more time goes by the more I realize I'm always changing. This journey could take forever... Renae L. Soler

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The following comments are for "Inseparable Lovers"
by nae411

Nae: "Inseperable"
"..we became children."...I like that. Thanks again for sharing "you."..

Journey on,
RW

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: February 16, 2005 )

inseperable
Nae...
I like to read kind of poems that make my mind go beyond the words and dig inside...your was such a great one..
I like most : the third stanza
thanks for share this piece with us

all the best
fairgrace

( Posted by: fairgrace [Member] On: February 18, 2005 )

Bobby7L and Fairgrace
Thank you both for taking the time to read and comment. I am glad you enjoyed.

Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Moderator] On: February 18, 2005 )

very nice
very nice

( Posted by: FangChen [Member] On: February 18, 2005 )

so me
Nae,
I feel like I could've written this. So beautiful and pure, it brings me to life once again! Thank you

( Posted by: Serendipity [Member] On: February 19, 2005 )

Beautiful
This is beautiful and pure. It's the sort of thing we cynics need once in a while to keep our feet from becoming mired in the muck!

( Posted by: Viper9 [Member] On: February 19, 2005 )

So True
"surrendering thoughts"
"I can't fool you"
"you know the real me"
Thank you for Reasuring me that I am not crazy,

Sean Micheals

( Posted by: SeanMicheals [Member] On: April 15, 2005 )

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