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Watching atrocities
soldiers with bleeding gums
raping the human race with
shimmering machetes
in the moonlight
dismembered legs,
fragments of foregone conclusions
failure of reason
Mexican tap-dancing on tables
made of marble with a crimson glaze
ask me who I am
and I'll tell you nothing
say no evil, though I heard it
the screams coming from the bedroom
next door
hairline fracture walls
can't mask suffering
a cup of genocide, black,
no sugar,
not quite decaf because the rush,
they need the rush
of popped jugulars and
scalped babies and
posters of Marilyn Monroe


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"Imperious, choleric, irascible, extreme in everything, with a dissolute imagination the like of which has never been seen... there you have me in a nutshell, and kill me again or take me as I am, for I shall not change."

From his Last Will & Testament, Marquis de Sade


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The following comments are for "Meditations on Channel 6"
by strangedaze

geno grande
reason fails

( Posted by: drsoos [Member] On: February 17, 2005 )

Wow!
That piece is great. It makes you think, it points out atrocities that are glossed over so routinely. Very well done.

( Posted by: everybodyelsesgirl [Member] On: February 18, 2005 )

Raw
I liked how absolutely raw this was. Like EEG points out, people usually try to dress it up before they take it out, so to speak. I like finding new postings from you.
Ellie

( Posted by: Eleanor [Member] On: February 19, 2005 )





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