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The smoothness of the snowflakes
The clean whiteness of the snow
The huge area of the outer space
The rays of the sun shine and glow
The twinkle light of the star
The bright of the moon up so far
The pure blueness of the sky
The singing of birds above so high
The lovely scent of Vanilla flower
The stream of hope ,strength ,and power
The width and the mystery of the deep blue sea
The sweet and the luscious honey of the bee
Is what your love means to me

The sweet is never as sweet without the sour, and I know the sour which allows me to appreciate the sweet.

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The following comments are for "Bliss"
by fairgrace

Why not? I read this over and over. Actually, I needed to. For a moment, I laid back, just to feel this, moment. I recorded this, as I sometimes do, just to feel again, and again.
I do this to inspire a life to live and grow.
Bless this, our "bliss" be, to know...Why not?...~Robin~

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: February 18, 2005 )

fairgrace: Paradise found
Fairgrace, You know how I feel about "the"...haha, so I won't go there...Images galore.. a feast for our hearts..Thanks for sharing..


( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: February 19, 2005 )

I am a fool for poetry that relates true love to the beauty of nature. I adore this poem.

( Posted by: nelson [Member] On: February 20, 2005 )

You Know
It has been awhile, kindred soul.

You know I always like the romantic ones the best, but I have been reading all that you have been so hard at work producing and my! how you have grown and matured in so little time ....

....and sigh! how I have missed your sweetness and innocence.


( Posted by: Majnuna [Member] On: March 4, 2005 )

blissful love
The first line got me... "The smoothness of the snowflakes"... Your poem flows smooth and goes with velvet creaminess...

( Posted by: maimai [Member] On: May 16, 2005 )

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