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You're just so lovely
Carressing your lips
Looking into your eyes
I must be dreaming
In this sweet ardor
I can't help but gasp for breath
And cry;
It's all been perfect
Your name is always
Wafting through my mind
In you, I'm drowning
Losing myself inside
Passion, like I've never known
Engulfs me, through and through
You're really so lovely
Believe when I say
I love you

She falls softly down from towering pedastools...

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The following comments are for "Lovely"
by shefallssoftly

I feel so nice while reading your poem, i read it nice and slow, your words are just like a nice still stream coming smoothly, then i lost myself inside! Thank you! Hope to have a pleausre to communicate with you!
Clark from China

( Posted by: Clark [Member] On: February 16, 2005 )

Thank you!
Wow, thank you so much for your comment! I really appreciate it when people enjoy my work.

( Posted by: shefallssoftly [Member] On: February 16, 2005 )

Your words are silky, nice ebb and flow. Nice read!

( Posted by: poesandpoetry [Member] On: February 16, 2005 )

Thanks, poes
I appreciate your take on my piece-- I've seen you around here a lot, I'll have to look into some of your work.

( Posted by: shefallssoftly [Member] On: February 18, 2005 )

Very nice poem. I feel poetry should move people, and that is what this poem has done to me. It brings back memories of love, lost and found. I think anyone can relate to that.

( Posted by: nelson [Member] On: February 20, 2005 )

A very high compliment
Thank you-- one of the greatest compliments that I tend to give people concerning their poetry is that it is "accessible." The nature of writing should not be exclusive as long as we are each literate, and I'm positively glowing that you think my poetry is not exclusive.

( Posted by: shefallssoftly [Member] On: February 20, 2005 )

when I read your bio..I found that you were saying any one who wants to know about me ..then he can see me in my poetry

now I can kow about you after reading more than a work of you:
you are your poem
and this is not very high comliment :;}
you seem young..can I ask how old are you

warm regards

( Posted by: fairgrace [Member] On: February 20, 2005 )

Confessions to fairgrace
I'm only 17, I must confess.. but wise beyond my years, I hope.

( Posted by: shefallssoftly [Member] On: February 20, 2005 )

wow...I never expected u to be ateenager...because you look so wise and sort of sage...God bless u


( Posted by: fairgrace [Member] On: February 21, 2005 )

Very smooth
Reading your poems is like taking a slow ride down a lazy river in a small boat - letting the river take you wherever, and not caring where, because you know it will be good.


( Posted by: feliciastone [Member] On: February 21, 2005 )

Thanks again, Felicia!
Wow, your comments are not only incredibly kind but also beautifully worded. I appreciate your reading.

( Posted by: shefallssoftly [Member] On: February 21, 2005 )

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