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Fire fueled furious passion,
Dark rimmed lips searching.
Exploring every rise and curve,
Finding serenity in mutual embrace.

Hotly, heavy breaths heaving,
In time with a rampant heart.
Beating unto bursting with,
Exhiliration from each brush.

My skin burns with searing love,
Chained to you by dreams.
Patient longing until it may,
Pass into perfection for us.

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