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Your skin burns my flesh.
Your lips sear my naked soul.
The notes of your voice are poetry.
Your art compels my mind.
Your thoughts intrigue mine.
Your face makes me weep in awe.
Your dreams fascinate my passion.
You are sublime amongst all women.
I humbly adore you, personification
of perfection.

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The following comments are for "Perfection"
by nelson

I liked the well fusing and mixing between spiritual and sensual elements..


( Posted by: fairgrace [Member] On: February 19, 2005 )

Thank you fairgrace for reading and commenting on my poem.

( Posted by: nelson [Member] On: February 20, 2005 )

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