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to the tune of "Frere Jaques (Are You Sleeping)"

Dedicated to my bride of 20 years ago as of June 29, 2005.

Will you be mine?
Won't you be my Valentine?

Will you be mine, sweetheart?
Won't you be my sweetheart?
I love you
I love you

and she replied...

Yes I will be
I will be your Valentine-

I will be yours, sweetheart
I will be your sweetheart
I love you
I love you


"A foolish consistency is the hobgoblin of little minds, adored by little statesman and philosophers and divines. With consistency a great soul has simply nothing to do."

- Ralph 'Where's Waldo' Emerson

"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like. And I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve."
- Bilbo Baggins

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The following comments are for "Will You Be Mine ?"
by drsoos

Soos: Love is like Paris.
"Fluctuat nec mergitur."..It is tossed by the waves, but does not sink..(Motto of Paris)...Just like love...Happy Valentine's, to you and yours..

Robert William

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: February 14, 2005 )

Soos' Valentine
Dr. Luv,

Catching up on a little reading from the 'stacks', so to speak.

This one was so very sweet and adorable I could hardly contain myself. I hope she felt the same way, Darlin'!


( Posted by: GibsonGirl [Member] On: June 16, 2005 )

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