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To spin an airy tale
to lift the soulful face,
writing of good feelings
and virtues of wondrous taste.

To paint the sky in hues
of heavenly array
and dream of carefree times
where troubles wash away.

To feel good once more
and partake of life’s bouquet,
oblivious of inconsolable fright;
the anguish and dismay.

To slip back into that easy space
simply ignorant of destination,
to shed the shackles of horror
boggles the imagination.


------
I read your poems
rich and sweet
then lay roses at
your feet.

Char


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The following comments are for "To Feel Good Once More"
by Char

Poem
Pretty nice poem. Reminiscent of the sentiments in the song, "Over The Rainbow" (the Four Freshmen's version my favorite).

I did think the last 3 stanzas were better than the first.

I like the simplicity and economy of your style and your poems always say something with feeling, not just sentiment.

( Posted by: gomarsoap [Member] On: February 14, 2005 )

char
hi Char

I always like the optimistic sense in your writings..
I enjoyed the read

all the best

( Posted by: fairgrace [Member] On: February 16, 2005 )

Your Unique style
...I see is admired by others as well. The power of words is in your mind, a beautiful mind it is. Thanks for sharing your beauty with us.....looking forward to more........hoping........

Luv ya,
Dar

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: March 6, 2005 )

To Feel Good Once More
"to lift the soulful face" Great line, great poem. To write, paint and partake in the easy life.

( Posted by: Charmr [Member] On: March 20, 2005 )





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