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Cast away in darkest night
Pain has risen to new height
Chanting prayers wish to heal
But the hurt inside is real
Like a box without a tune
Or the stars without the moon
Broken, broken, it’s been so long
That I’ll never fix what’s wrong
These chains I’ve forged hold me down
Until the day I know I’ll drown
This weight upon me
Never will it let me be
No joy my heart will feel
No love will flow through my veins
My only bliss is when it rains
Drops of tears from the heaven
Pull me up; be my leaven

~..::Forever Silver::..~

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