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Last night I dreamt

Our lives together joined.

Vapour trails

Evaporate quickly.



Leaving my old life

Only to be stopped at the border.

Vainly,I thought

Everything would be easy.



Lost,alone,scared

Oddly feeling that`s how it should be.

Valiantly I plod on

Eventually to be forgotten.


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The wise man as he travels through life enjoys the scenery to either side,since he knows he will not come this way again.The road ahead winds back and forth,over the hills and far away,and who knows where it will lead?


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