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Robotic ver .4

The bats are going back in
The lights are going back off
The petals are opening up
The soil is getting soft

The air is getting warmer
But this bench is still cold
A robot is already awake
The pigeons are in a row

A walking repair kit
A talking swiss knife
A missing off switch
A titanium alloy knight

In solitude with a statue
Dismissing the whispering leaves
Baring so much more
Than anatomical similarities

A brazen image of a terrene Fortuna
A refined sculpture of an immaculate figure
Attenuated till pixilated missing images
Of my long presumed dead arch nemesis

[i]"I have so many many modes
Millions of circuits...billions of diodes
To err is human; to be precise is programmed
It is impossible to be perfect and in the same cycle become man

Grey/blue/orange/off-white/bright yellow
I bet these dawns taste just like jello
(Where did we go?)
Off into the static is where we went
Just you and I...and my cousin, the park bench"[/i]

[b]A genus confused extraterrestrial robot
Defragging in the most meditative of spots
R-O-M memories, Technicolor radar dreams
Cut and paste relationships, Panavision thoughts[/b]

[i]"A box of matches to light your oven
A Craftmatic lap to rest your head"[/i]






"Excuse me if my monotone
Makes me sound a bit tard
If I sit here too long
I'll become an optical hazard"

Alex, The boy full of ideas

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The following comments are for "Robotic Ver 4"
by amusedlilboy

If anyone knows how to make bold and italics properly, I'd appreciate it very much for any help.

( Posted by: amusedlilboy [Member] On: February 13, 2005 )

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