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The snow came while we slept
a giant fleece blanket laid on in mid slumber

Stepping out from the darkness of the house
I step out onto a brilliant white canvas
painted in thick white stillness
a perfect black and white photograph

Winter bleak refurbished with icy brilliance
Dormant trees stand motionless with their
baren limbs now cloaked with their new furs
tinged by God's paintbrush



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All that we see or seem, is but a dream within a dream....
Edgar Allen Poe


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The following comments are for "God's Blanket"
by poesandpoetry

A Snow Bed
Poesandpoetry;
This is quite remarkable...I loved it very much! To think, when someone really look at God's work..it's exactly what it is, A Blanket! A Blanket of beautiful snow...

Thanks for a great and excellent read!!!!

Blessings,
{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: February 12, 2005 )





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