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Here I am,
Laid Faithless.
Condemned to my misery ,
Tragic to my defeat.

Here I am - miserable.
While silent death creeps over my veins,
Blood drained at my very scream,
Shattered dreams of glasses...

In the jealousy of defeat ,
The pain is unbearable , honestly,I tell you.
As tears bled from my eyes ...
Every little hope drained inside.

Decayed Reality
Flowers of mourn surround my deathbed.
While others enjoy the vitality of life,
I grew weaker...

Here I am , laid faithless.
Fateless in misery.
The agony to be in dear life ,
The urge to good or evil.

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