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Here it goes again
Eyes of jade dying in the after sin
Fading flower lost within
Shutting out the world again
Death couldn’t carry a colder chill
The end wouldn’t tarry a lesser trill
Maybe she’ll find some peace so thin
Maybe she’ll know where to begin
Or maybe she’ll never feel again
I beg of you to look at me
Feel the pain I shove at thee
Hurt is life dripping real
To hide from it and never feel
Is the life of no appeal
I beg of you on my knee
Feel the pain I shove at thee
Feel it all within your heart
For me please stop your slow depart
Pushing back all the world
As your greater pain unfurled
Now I dream about those days
Before the era of this haze
Now I hold your laughter close
When all your eyes do is doze
You wander now far from me
But I will wait here for thee

~..::Forever Silver::..~

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