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You stare straight through me
I stare back at you, I cannot see inside
How is it so easy for me to fall in love
With the way you twinkle
The way you shine
You're the reflection of a thousand stars
That I look up and see every night
A bold variation of luscious colors
Ranging from the darkest dark, to the lightest light
High frequency, waves of emotion
You keep me captivated
With your mystery, your secretive movement
And in this exact moment
I swear to you green eyes
I could be lost in you forever


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The following comments are for "Dear Green Eyes"
by NeurotickupkakE

loveit :) nothing else to say

( Posted by: twistymisty [Member] On: August 4, 2009 )

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