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I think it will be alright now
I can finally see my way
The painful, endless night
Is fading now to day
And I feel it all come together
And itís like Iím almost there
I think I know my place now
And maybe joy is not so rare.
And itís all not perfect yet
Perhaps it will never be
But a tiny bit of heaven
Is enough to satisfy me.

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