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Warm, salty, droplets of sarrow,
Come easy, like clouds before a storm,
Like the death of a dream,
In the face of the reality,
I have come to know.

Sometimes my heart, chokes,
suffocates from lack of childhood senses,
That have, ceased to be remembered,
As I crawl along the lonely path,
I have come to know.

Struggeling to breathe, gasping,
All the life, I don't feel,
Scratching, the scars on my soul,
Screaming, for love, for affection,
All That I have been denied.

Hopes, dwindling, fading into dust,
Borrowing faith from the bank of survival,
Just to carry on, waiting,
Death of dreams, love and hope,
Is the reality, I,have come to know.


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