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The Dimensia Code Chptr 1
(the names of the characters might have changed a bit)

Zack checked his computer for about the hundredth time that day. Ever since he had taken his research job he had been extremely bored. He had been running the same data for over a week but it never added up. Of course, the pay was good, but he was starting to think it wasnt worth it.

When he started, Zack was immediately put to work. It seemed though, that this would not last long since he had not uncovered any new information in over a month. His stupid computer couldn't even run the numbers.

He checked it again.

He quickly rechecked his facts and picked up his phone. He finally had the answer.

It is for the visible to comprehend the invisible.


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