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Visual Temptation...
by Robinbird (Member) - published: February 8, 2005
Word Count: 12 Word Bytes: 98 Viewed: 356 times
Category - Haiku
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she walks by again
a visual temptation
as lockjaw sets in

~Robinbird~


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by Robinbird

Robin's whiplasher...
Big smile. Good stuff.


Robert William

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: February 8, 2005 )

Bobby's visual...
Thanks Bobby, means alot coming from you. Beautiful women can be some of the
loneliest due to that lockjaw syndrome.
I'm glad I could make smile, makes me smile back. Thanks again...Robin

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: February 8, 2005 )

visual robinbird
Would there perhaps be drool involved in this (quite cinematic) little vignette? ;-)

( Posted by: windchime [Member] On: February 8, 2005 )

JorgeLuis.I like ...
that word excellent. Thanks much...~Robinbird~

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: February 15, 2005 )

AND AGAIN!
BLACK EYED WITCH!

( Posted by: Robinbird [Member] On: April 27, 2006 )





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