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My friend and I spent hours cleaning out my car on Friday.
The following day, I took it to Mike's to get the outside scrubbed.
It was so completely spotless and wonderful for the first time in months.
Then a certain someone placed his muddy boots on top of the car.
I got angry so he decided to just throw them on the super clean car floor.
He didn't even apologize when I told him that it had just been cleaned.
I am so unhappy right now.

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i tripped and got covered in booboos.



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by englishtabloids

mud!!!!!!
MUD! I hate it when people get in my car with dirty feet. Or when spill cereal and then trample it into the carpet! I hate vaccuming!!

( Posted by: supergranny [Member] On: February 9, 2005 )





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