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Lonely hair, growing strong
I wonder if you've been there long
growing there beside that mole
waving from that folicle hole

Take my tweezers and pluck you out
a lonely little folicle spout
take you out and leave me bare
there's no place for a lonely hair


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All that we see or seem, is but a dream within a dream....
Edgar Allen Poe


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The following comments are for "A lonely hair"
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A Lonely Hair
This was a big change from what I have been reading onhere. I liked it alot. Had me smiling by the second line!

( Posted by: Eleanor [Member] On: February 9, 2005 )





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