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No matter how much I try to forget
No matter how much I regret
These things stay with me
For all eternity
These sins
And sly grins
And time spent with you
Knowing youíve been untrue
When I needed you more
Than ever before
The pain in my eyes
The tricks she tries
Tell me I should hate
In my mind thoughts grate
Causing pain and more regret
And I still canít forget


------
Carter Walker Reeb


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