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I just don't belong here
but I can't help but stay
Maybe soon I'll leave here
But maybe not today

Destiny once drew near
but I flung it far away
cowardice and fear
but who cares anyway

I just don't fit in here
but I don't know where to go
Maybe soon I'll leave here
Maybe I don't know.




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All that we see or seem, is but a dream within a dream....
Edgar Allen Poe


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The following comments are for "Maybe I don't know"
by poesandpoetry

You really surprised me
This work is somehow stunning in the progress of the piece. I nearly groaned after the first stanza presuming it would be your typical "you don't know me" piece of poetry with nice rhythm but a tired message. I love that your poetry takes responsibility for the situation-- it's distinctive. Otherwise, fantastic rhythm and very accessible subject. Nice.

( Posted by: shefallssoftly [Member] On: February 18, 2005 )





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