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This is who i am
Self Hatred Burns inside
How do you think I feel
Physical and Mental
Abuse from parents
Pain from friends
And hate from foes
Now is the time
For the Neglected ones
To unite together
And show everyone
That we can be taken seriously

Years and years of Self abuse
And suicide attempts
We can show the world
That we are better
than what we've been taken for
Can you seriously not see
That we are just living our lives?
We are not trying to put on a show
Are try to amuse you
We are just living our lives

You have never felt
The pain that we've been
Through yet you fail to notice
How we live our lives with
Respect for each other
You have it so good
Your insults and assults will no longer affect me
I'll take as much as you can give
But you will give up because
I will never give in

I'd love to see you
Live on day in my life
Maybe you'll realize that we
Are so much better than you
We are so much more peacful
Than our appearance allows you to see
I will never allow you to hurt me again Mother
And father, I will no longer allow your Sick attempts to traumitize me
Affect the way I live my life
And my friends can give me shit for who I am
And I will accept it


------
King Lucifer


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The following comments are for "My life"
by King Lucifer

Very Nice
Very emotional, I can totally relate to you
I'm guessing your parents aren't really abusive, but it adds...Texture to the poem..I enjoyed reading this, and it's by far one of my favorites.

( Posted by: KingOfHearts [Member] On: February 9, 2005 )

Beautiful
this is the essence of my goth beliefs...
embacing the sorrow that has been placed in my life and being one with it..
i love your work lucifer...
i'm hoping to see more of your work in the future...
Hail Darkness!!

( Posted by: livingcorpse [Member] On: March 17, 2005 )





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