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'Twas a Dim and Eerie Night
My Heart Faltered and Filled with Fright
I Gripped it and Grappled it, but for all my Might
I could not shake the wicked Sight
Ice Coated Fingers
Steadily, it Lingers
Lingers on my Icy Fingers
In the Darkest Dark of Night
It Grips my Neck; Ready to Bite

--By Daniel O'Brien

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