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You say you want to
know the real me.

Are you sure?

I will show you
but remember that sometimes
we ask for things we truly
donít want.

I am here.
Real.
Ready.
Able.

At times All woman.
Occasionally all child.

Intelligent.
Confident.
Sensual.
Sexy.
Naughty.
Vulnerable.

I am strong,
yet fragile.

I am honest
though at times I lie,
and know that
when I do,
itís for real reasons,
like protecting you from me.

So tell me,
do you still want to know the real me?

------
I am on a journey. Looking for Me. Everyday I get a little closer. The more time goes by the more I realize I'm always changing. This journey could take forever... Renae L. Soler


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The following comments are for "The Real Me"
by nae411

re:the real me
Iloved this. So honest and so true. This I feel is in all of us.

Yes I still want to know the real you. Inperfections and all.

( Posted by: annefreemana [Member] On: February 4, 2005 )

Demeter/Annefreemana
Thank you. Demeter, stop protecting you guys? LOL, be careful what you ask for.

Anne, I want to know the real you too. I love when people are honest and just go out on a limb to be who they really are. Imperfections make us who we are. Thank you!

Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: February 4, 2005 )

nice
This reminds me of my mother. I like this poem.

( Posted by: freak101 [Member] On: February 4, 2005 )

freak101
I think I like your mother, lol. Welcome to lit.org!

Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: February 4, 2005 )

Nae's question...
Yes.

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: February 4, 2005 )

Bobby7L
Bobby, Well bring it on then! Good luck, lol.

Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: February 4, 2005 )

Great - Nae
Thanks for posting. I agree - true poetry is when the heart of the poet is transparent, and we can look through it and see ourselves.

Felicia

( Posted by: feliciastone [Member] On: February 4, 2005 )

nae411
Thank you, I think I will like this sit.

( Posted by: freak101 [Member] On: February 4, 2005 )

Felicia, Freak101, JLuis
Felicia, you write transparent as well and I love it, thanks for reading!

Freak, I am happy you are enjoying the site. We enjoy having you!

Jorge, I am happy not to have scared you off, lol. You are a making yourself out to be a good movie critic ;0).

Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: February 16, 2005 )





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