Lit.Org - a community for readers and writers Advanced Search

Average Rating

(0 votes)

You must login to vote

One puts their trust in God
who first puts trust in us.
We live our lives down chosen paths
winding, turning, bending
sometimes twisted ones.
God alone will help us choose
the right one we should use.
There is no smooth and easy ride
only the years' of times we've tried.


The following comments are for "The Right One We Should Use"
by annefreemana

The right one we should use
Hi Anne,

I enjoyed reading this. It is amazing to me how we all see our journeys so differently. The important thing is that we are looking for our path. Welcome to I look forward to reading more of you!


( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: February 4, 2005 )

Add Your Comment

You Must be a member to post comments and ratings. If you are NOT already a member, signup now it only takes a few seconds!

All Fields are required

Commenting Guidelines:
  • All comments must be about the writing. Non-related comments will be deleted.
  • Flaming, derogatory or messages attacking other members well be deleted.
  • Adult/Sexual comments or messages will be deleted.
  • All subjects MUST be PG. No cursing in subjects.
  • All comments must follow the sites posting guidelines.
The purpose of commenting on Lit.Org is to help writers improve their writing. Please post constructive feedback to help the author improve their work.