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It flows straight through you.
How do you do it?
Your laugh, your smile,
Your everything;
So immaculate.
Striking light
To this darkened heart,
Over and over again;
Never ending.
Your love.
It pulsates through my veins;
Function me.
Help me forget.
I'm numb for you...
Lift my world above you;
I'm afraid of height,
I swallow my fear.
But you're there;
In everything...
I see, I touch, I hear;
Smell and taste;
I Love You...
All of you.


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