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A glimpse of happiness,
On the rainiest of days;
With your smile...
Your smile.
Make me believe once more,
That it isn't all as bad as it seems;
With your laugh...
Your laugh.
Make me warm,
To the perfect degree;
With you touch...
Your touch.
Send shivers up my spine,
Run them back down again;
With your whisper...
Your whisper.
But with your smile,
With your laugh,
With your touch,
With your whisper;
Let me find courage.
Let me find truth.
I'll find your love.


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