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Solitary Confinement by Cleveland W. Gibson

I�m Foreign Legion. True. Killer. I really am.
�So what�s the problem?� the French
psychiatrist demanded.
�Nothing. Just lucid dreams.�
The pause.
�Then tell us your nightmares.�
�The bad ones?�
�Sure. Sure.�
�I had one about my cell- mate.�
�Cell-mate? But you�re in solitary?�
� Yeah but he keeps saying he�s dead.�

The End


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The following comments are for "Solitary Conefinement"
by Cleveland W. Gibson

Nice...
I like the effect you have,especiall with so few words. (the wierd question marks/formatting things are distracting though) The "true" in the first line seems out of place; reading it as "true killer" makes more sense to me.

Eerie.

( Posted by: jetman_jake [Member] On: February 2, 2005 )

Solitary Confinement
Hi thanks for your comment. I take your point. God knows what went wrong with the formating. Guess these sot of things happen. Shame though. Thanks for reading.
CWG

( Posted by: Cleveland W. Gibson [Member] On: February 18, 2005 )





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