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When words cloud my head,
They refuse to let me be,
When Iím laying alone in bed.
Maybe one may hold the key.

They refuse to let me be,
They move fast, I canít hold.
Maybe one can hold the key,
To help me be some one bold.

They move fast, I canít hold
On to one just to see,
To help me be some one bold,
Instead of being me.

Onto one just to see,
I can never steal a peek.
Instead of being me,
I wish to be some one free.

I can never steal a peek.
When Iím laying alone in bed.
I wish to be some one free,
When words cloud my head.


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